I really like your idea, although your elevator pitch should be selling your product and not just discussing your findings and interviews. Maybe you should mention how college students can benefit, how this product is used, how much the app cost, how costly the app would be to create, and how time consuming it would be to find the open spots for the app. Check out my blog for cordless chargers in Marston. http://ent3003tb.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I agree with Taylor. As opposed to just explaining what your idea is, an elevator pitch is more about persuasion. You should be trying to convince me why your idea is a good one. Aside from that, I'm not really sure how you're going to map out open parking spots in realtime. I do think this app would be super helpful though and, if it became a reality, I would certainly download it! http://abraham-khalil.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
The idea is amazing, but I will agree with Taylor. For the elevator assignment, you should be selling your idea to your investors, and not have discussed the interviews. Also, you should have included a summary of your idea in order to further understand the business proposal. Overall, you should have explained your idea in full detailed, and how it would benefit the consumer.
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I really like your idea, although your elevator pitch should be selling your product and not just discussing your findings and interviews. Maybe you should mention how college students can benefit, how this product is used, how much the app cost, how costly the app would be to create, and how time consuming it would be to find the open spots for the app. Check out my blog for cordless chargers in Marston. http://ent3003tb.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteI agree with Taylor. As opposed to just explaining what your idea is, an elevator pitch is more about persuasion. You should be trying to convince me why your idea is a good one. Aside from that, I'm not really sure how you're going to map out open parking spots in realtime. I do think this app would be super helpful though and, if it became a reality, I would certainly download it!
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Hi Jason,
ReplyDeleteThe idea is amazing, but I will agree with Taylor. For the elevator assignment, you should be selling your idea to your investors, and not have discussed the interviews. Also, you should have included a summary of your idea in order to further understand the business proposal. Overall, you should have explained your idea in full detailed, and how it would benefit the consumer.
My blog:http://anaguevarauf.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html